Open Poetry #20 |
Aware Of A Sunnier Side |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Aware Of A Sunnier side Would revenge be sweet Or perhaps just a waste Would I feel much better If I clear the bitter taste Ridding the aches inside Will revenge be my cure Annoyed by displeasure I could no longer endure If I poured out my heart Would it help me repair Could revenge fix a hurt Or create more despair Resolving heart matters Bringing the end to grief I had thought of revenge Then sought comic relief Aware of a sunnier side Laughter removing pain Grinners always prosper Heart will sweeten again HopeĀ©2002 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, A lovely and exceptional write. Your talent is showing. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Seymour your reply is always glowing Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Aware of a sunnier side Laughter removing pain Grinners always prosper Heart will sweeten again" (smiles) Yes, yes, may your golden heart always come back with a vengeance and find all the joy and laughter your heart deserves so very much! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully upbeat, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Big smiles for your "discovery." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So many times we have to laugh to keep from crying... and even if it doesn't help us much, it's more pleasant for those around us. *S* I like this very much, Hope... may the grins continue. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
revenge is nice...laughter is good. I don't know which I'd pick, in a given situation. Nice write! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Revenge sounds sweet right about now, but that always fades away and the bright side does always come along so I guess I'd be better off with that..anyways great read Kristen |
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