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The 'Two Souls Dance' in the Meeting of my Mind
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The 'Two Souls Dance' in the Meeting of my Mind |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The "Two Souls Dance" In the Meeting of my Mind Shall I curtsey? Will you bow? When the music chimes, will love begin, now? I shall take your hand, thus your arm, you will gaze at me, with no hidden charms, and glide we two upon the floor to dance to strains of music…and more… no words, no words, we shall not converse… just your soul in green eyes immersed, while your heart strains, full of delight that I be here, in your arms for the night… when the winds blow upon the common and the tomorrow before us yawns, when the night’s twilighted splendor comes just before the dawn when the music’s song is fading when you loose my soft hand’s hold when the music ends will love begin, now? Shall I curtsey? Will you bow? ~*~ 15 June, 2000 ©KRJ revised 24 April 2002 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-24-2002 10:58 PM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I love the flow in this. It is a painted dance. You have a truly blessed mind. Liked it alot! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And such a beautiful flowing dance...with word conveyed only through eyes and ..... Such a vision.... Very nice Karilea...yes it is... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
bowwowing here...  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, This was so enjoyable, I loved it muches. Love, Cerenity |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Balladeer! Seems to be a night for dancing  Very very nicely done...wonderful flow Karilea. Enjoyed my final read for the day. ~Nite Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Take a bow, sweet friend, encore, encore, this is a wonderful piece that dances across the page! (big hugggsssssss) I just love the rhythm of your verse, sweet friend, this flows so wonderfullty, we all love you so much, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
How could any real man not? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine you waltz lovely with the words on marble stage woman wearing elegant and gold braid enjoyed this romanticia |
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