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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-04-23 01:00 PM

There is a star that dawns in lover's eyes,
Joining set of moon and rise of sun;
A star that brightens the darkest skies.

A star to find when cloudy day denies
And night of pain is said and done.
There is a star that dawns in lover's eyes.

A star to seek when nightlife cries
And moon and stars are no longer one.
A star that brightens the darkest skies.

A star that breathes when lovers sigh
And threads of love by hearts are spun.
There is a star that dawns in lover's eyes.

A star that hears when asked of why,
When lovers speak in their unison.
A star that brightens the darkest skies.

A star to release when old love dies,
And to hold when new love's just begun.
There is a star that dawns in lover's eyes,
A star that brightens the darkest skies.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-04-23 03:08 PM

moonlight Romeo darling heart OH MY firstly this is what I was talking about, it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. YOUR writing is utterly utterly beautiful, soft and awesome in its uniquely picturesque way. Absolutely first class

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-04-23 03:09 PM

MR~

you remind me how love should feel....thank you...

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-04-23 04:02 PM

awwwww your juliet is very lucky to have a romantic like you. well written my friend!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-23 04:57 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully breathtaking villanelle, sweet friend, I just know your Juliet will always be blessed by your love and will always see that star in your eyes! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2002-04-24 01:48 AM

very very very sweet...
thanx4this delightful read...
smiles2uPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-04-24 09:43 AM

"A star that breathes when lovers sigh
And threads of love by hearts are spun.
There is a star that dawns in lover's eyes."

Beautiful!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-04-24 10:15 AM

MoonlightRomeo~
Delicately tender thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

8 posted 2002-04-24 01:29 PM

Thank you all. Love is who I am, and what is in my heart.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

9 posted 2002-04-25 02:48 AM

Love is certainy fashionable on you, Dear.

I love this!

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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