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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-04-24 03:16 PM

Upon delicate clouds of a dream
I am lost in the wonder of you
floating like a leaf upon a stream
in a whirlpool of sapphire blue

Soft lashes of mahogany hue
gently fans feelings of desire
flames of passions ignite
a raging insatiable fire

I had a reflection of a dream
upon the ripples of my heart
your lips were upon mine
silhouettes never to part

From sleepy dawn of morn
till ravishing sunset kisses the bay
we will bathe upon the ripples
enjoying sweet currents of today.

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-04-24 04:20 PM

yes, I like the way this flows Victoria. . . always wondered what happens when you throw a stone in the pool of the heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2002-04-24 06:45 PM

Victoria,

Sapphire blue, mahogany hue . . . nice.

Especially enjoyed the last verse and the last line.

Kraw'

"Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor." e

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-24 07:25 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always scatter ripples of laughter and love across these pages, this is majestic! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you always dive into the blue with your soulmate! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-04-24 10:43 PM

thank you sven and kraw and noah..glad you enjoyed..thanks for peeking in hugs

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-04-24 11:47 PM

beautiful thoughts, Victoria. Your words have a rippling effect of calm and serenity with just the right touch of desire.....very nice

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2002-04-25 12:27 PM

This is softly and sweetly written, Victoria. Poetry like this has a rippling effect through us all.

Nice! *hugs*
Michael

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-04-25 09:08 AM

This is a beauty, Vic.
Sandra

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-04-25 09:56 AM

Victoria darling girl Ohhhhhhh how I love this piece of yours it has style it has grace it flows across the page with perfection. Its timing is excellent, as are the words. So skilfully woven in hues of wonder. Excellent writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2002-04-25 10:34 AM

Victoria!
I love this. Awesome job and such wonderful images of love. Well done.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2002-04-25 12:40 PM

vic, this is serenely beautiful in it's entirety. well done friend!!

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-04-25 05:17 PM

Vic....you write so so awesomely!!!!

Always such passion and vision in your
poetry...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-04-25 05:35 PM

This is lovely Victoria...one of my favorites...James

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-04-25 06:03 PM

thank you deery...glad you enjoyed..hugs

michael...so nice to hear from you ..thank you
for peeking in..hugss

sandra..thank you so much sweet lady hugs

thank you marsha..for that lovely response..hugs

thank you larry..nice to hear from you today..hugss glad
you enjoyed..

donna..thank you so much..hugss..always nice
hearing from you

barry..so sweet of you to say ..hugsss

james..thank you ..im glad you enjoyed my words..hugss

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

14 posted 2002-04-26 03:12 AM

Your words never fail to capture me.

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

15 posted 2002-04-26 05:13 AM

Oh Victoria this is absolutely gorgeous, I enjoyed this poem very much, thanks for sharing
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

[This message has been edited by tracie66 (04-26-2002 05:13 AM).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2002-04-26 10:57 AM

thank you eddie..nice to see you back with us again..hugs

tracie..thank you so much for peeking in hugs

snowpants
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KS

17 posted 2002-04-26 06:56 PM

'Upon delicate clouds of a dream
I am lost in the wonder of you
floating like a leaf upon a stream
in a whirlpool of sapphire blue'

These are great lines, Victoria...the entire poem was written with such grace...

sp

I've been down this road forever,
and the time has come to circle back home...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

18 posted 2002-04-26 08:05 PM

thank you snowpants..so nice to hear from you...you must be busy these days..we dont see you too much..hugss..Dont be a stranger

Victoria~

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2002-04-27 01:42 AM

I had a reflection of a dream
upon the ripples of my heart

~V~

so soft, tender and so you....HUGSSSS

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

20 posted 2002-04-27 01:49 AM

wonderful writing Sweetie...
Hugs2uAlwaysPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

21 posted 2002-04-27 09:28 AM

thank you lauren..always love when you peek in hugss

thank you Coco..great hearing from you as always..hugss

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

22 posted 2002-04-28 12:13 PM

Yes Victoria!!!
The ripples are a constant reminder of the memories that keep us afloat in our todays.

Pretty~

Verve
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

23 posted 2002-04-28 05:33 AM

WOw .... Wow ..... WOw ...

Enthralling!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

24 posted 2002-04-28 10:50 AM

"Soft lashes of mahogany hue
gently fans feelings of desire"

Victoria dear, you never run out of words. This is lovely.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

25 posted 2002-04-28 11:20 AM

thank you lori verve and floria..and for peeking in today...hugss to all..

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

26 posted 2002-04-28 06:08 PM

Hello Victoria

I will have to mark this down as one of my favourites, then again, all your words are so good and that makes it hard to choose.
Simply beautiful!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

27 posted 2002-04-28 06:16 PM

Victoria - this write is very dear. A very lucky person to have this written for...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

28 posted 2002-04-28 06:33 PM

I had a reflection of a dream
upon the ripples of my heart
your lips were upon mine
silhouettes never to part

I really love this, Victoria...

~lots of warm hugs~

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

29 posted 2002-04-29 10:39 AM

thank you sue bill and lyra..so much..so sweet of you to peek in..hugsss

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