Open Poetry #20 |
Garden of Light |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Drawn in the garden of light warm in the shade giving way to contrasts cascading in a haze exquisite in the mirror of dreams. Designs on the moonlight beveled around the edges reflect in glassy eyes scattered pieces of light timeless in the turning. Around a sundial moving deciphered through the eaves rising from a fountain that dances in the daylight gleaming in the mist. Streams float and come together edging along the hedge a kaleidoscope of color slow hands in the sunlight splashing flecks of golden glints. Instrumental in the movement lifting away the fog shaded blue beyond the clearing stepping from the shadows through the garden into light. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, And...waalaa there you are a dream come true! I like that. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, A delightful muse and enjoyable read. Sy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, as always your words are captured so beautifully...really liked the images in this, your vocab was way cool too! excellent write! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I could envision that kaleidoscope stream flowing like silk into the garden of light and bringing about the colors of Mother Nature to every budding leaf and flower! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have been stepping into my garden all weekend and it does bring light to my life..thanks Blues hugs M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lori - your words are beautiful, as your poem... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Larry~ No matter how dark the days are there is always a reason to move towards the light. I'm getting there! I can never thank you enough for your support. I mean that sincererly!!! Mr. Tabin~ An old muse is better than no muse at all! Thanks for reading and btw, you look good in pink!! I'm so glad you had a nice visit in Cape Cod and all the good times you shared with your poet friends. Amy~ Thank you sweet lady. I am grateful for the verses we share and that our paths cross now and then. You are truly a delight. Noah~ Mother nature works in strange ways. I believe she walks hand in hand with our fate and guides us to our destiny. I thank you always for reading and shedding your light. Maureen~ I believe when the day comes and we walk through that garden together where ever it may be, it will be a magical time to savor and walk slowly through. Hugs gf~ BC~ Oh BC you're much too kind, no sooner do I think I've found my way only to lose myself again. The light the light, it's just gotta be there!! Thanks... |
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