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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-04-24 11:48 AM

Listen ...
Hear my heart
the rhythm of its beat

Dancing ...
To its music
making the song complete

And sing ...
As Gull's do
while searching the sound

To hear ...
In each wave
a love endlessly bound

So sail ...
The calm seas
keeping me close to you

Riding ...
together ...
in this sea of blue

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-04-24 11:53 AM

aww I like this a lot! I've missed your words my friend

I would love to sail with ya in the sea of sparkling blue waters.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-04-24 12:03 PM

Lets hope those seas will always be calm

Nicely done.

~Victoria

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-04-24 12:07 PM

ctowen,
Charming enjoyed the read.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-04-24 12:19 PM

enjoyed the read

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-04-24 12:31 PM

quote:
So sail ...
The calm seas
keeping me close to you

HUGSSS

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-24-2002 12:31 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-24 12:36 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I just know the love of your life will forever be blessed to sail with you on loves eternitys waters! (big hugggsssss) This is beautifully romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-04-24 07:40 PM

Sailing ya back to the top.....

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-04-24 08:43 PM

What wonderful imagery in your work. I enjoyed this write very much. ThisDiamond

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-04-24 08:45 PM

I too enjoyed the images within this poem
Craig. Very well said...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2002-04-25 12:27 PM

Do you remember the Christopher Cross song, "Sailing?" This gives me that same feeling. Very nicely done, Craig.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

11 posted 2002-04-25 12:43 PM

beautifully expressed Craig
While miles apart
Each wave sends love from the heart
Hope

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-04-25 09:07 AM

Wonderful, Craig. Good to read you again.
Sandra

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2002-04-25 09:18 AM

Craig,
First class poem. This is good. Thanks.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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