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To Tell You.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I meant to tell you sooner I just couldn’tfind a way I tried to tell you poetically But the words weren’t mine to say I would have said it boldly Had my heart not been so full of pride I would have told you so sweetly In passionate confide I wanted to say aloud What my soul already knew But my tongue gets tied When I look at you I needed to explain These emotions I keep But I’m afraid my shyness Runs far too deep I must, I will, I’ll try Find a way to say To tell you of this love To speak these words one day. ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I thought that was what poetry was for... to allow those tongue-tied moments to find a way...  good morning SEA...thanks for the lovely... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I must, I will, I’ll try Find a way to say To tell you of this love To speak these words one day. Susan, I think you have. Poetically! ((Susan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You have tapped a reservoir of lovely poetic thoughts~ Beautifully done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Susan, I know just how you feel, I too know that feeling where you want to be with someone but you also don't want to risk making a fool out of yourself! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - your words are as beautiful as you are... BC |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful words from a beautiful poetess. Hugs. Like a red brick, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Speak the words when love is right And heart beats quicker at the sight Of one who makes your life worthwhile, One who makes you laugh and one who makes you smile. For when these words are heard by one Whose heart is filled with bright of sun; Then shall love be found by you In times of joy, forever new. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I meant to tell you sooner I just couldn'tfind a way I tried to tell you poetically But the words weren't mine to say I would have said it boldly Had my heart not been so full of pride I would have told you so sweetly In passionate confide ============================ and now you have found them...kissed them with cadence and sent them into the poetic winds...your muse gave the emtions a voice...and whispered what your heart needed to say. Keep talking...we're listening  Now for me some words come easy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I must, I will, I’ll try Find a way to say To tell you of this love To speak these words one day. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You just did Sue... and very beautifully spoken too. ~Hugs~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very sweet (and a bit melancholy). I've always had a softness for the sea. And SEA too, I suppose. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I hope one day you will be able to voice those words. I'm sure that lucky person will jump for joy at hearing them. (((hugs))) and a very nice, sweet poem, my friend.me |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I must, I will, I’ll try Find a way to say To tell you of this love To speak these words one day. Just do it...say Nike and I.  [This message has been edited by Duncan (04-25-2002 12:39 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, And the cat has your tongue again. It's okay, I love you do and don't say! Always... It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there sweet SEA, sweetie go on say it, say it before it is too late. Lovely poetic thoughts, flowed beautifully and expressed just as well...well penned ~HUGS~ Tracie~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I bet you express those thoughts very well to whomever you want, Susan. This is lovely. Sandra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautifully expressed, SEA... when the time is right, just hand over these words. *S* Well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely Sea...one of my favorites...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....not to worry....I think you already have...through this poem...beautifully done! |
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