Open Poetry #20 |
Quiet Tears |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Quiet Tears So softly quiet the tears in ones eye, slowly gently rolling down the cheek, silently splashing to the floor. You'd think they'd crash, and roar, and boom, in their agonized race to run away, but no… so softly quiet they leave ones eye, slowly, gently rolling down the cheek, silently splashing to the floor - the soundless tears of love. © wesley james beard, jr january 2002 [This message has been edited by jwesley (04-23-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is as soft and gentle and just as welcome as a spring rain. Beautiful and enjoyed so much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
invitingly lovely J. This speaks volumes, with so few words. Exellent!! Like a red brick, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JW....so softly quietly you write....in words that speak loudly from the page... Nicely done! |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Every now & then I stop in to read thinking I may find a gem ... I am never disappointed No one ever listened themselves into trouble. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Jimmy Love can make a beautiful sound from a tear into a poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so lovely, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are forever bound to touch her heart and make her sigh and cry happily! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
jwesley~ so many times, have those endless tears hit the floor, in such silence....for all the emotion behind this....hugsss to you.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I can remember those, but they are a fading memory...thanks for giving me a little reminder before I'd forgotten altogether. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you my friends, I truly appreciate the read, and especially the time it take to write a note.... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (04-25-2002 06:58 PM).] |
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