Open Poetry #20 |
from 'us and them' to 'we' --- words from here and there |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
me and you are just ordinary men like him and another with him yes, we are all simple creatures complexity devoid much the same yet we have this huge divide a gaping hole that is forever threatening to widen and to swallow what us and them have stood for all our lives and then there are those who talk as if they come from a place higher, apparently detached, as if the world revolves around them demigods talking philosophy giving lessons for living while all us and them need is food, water and shelter without having to beg for it sometimes i think (if it comes to that) i should cast a curse that all those preachers turn dumb and listen to their inner sounds that shall tell them to shut up for their own good and for the good of us and them then maybe us and them could all be called ‘we’ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I agree, some people act like there are barriers between them and the rest of us...but if they'd only see....good work Sudhir. Oh, by the way, it's nice to see you again. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I've though the same thoughts, good write. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Elizabeth and Seymour, Thanks my friends a lot... regards, sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very true and well written Sudhir! Enjoyed this morning. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, I too believe tat deep down we are all the same in some way and are only unique by our dreams and intuition, but should neevr be barb-wired by others doctrines! (sigh) This is powerfully provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent write, Sudhir... We can wish and hope. *S* |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
while all us and them need is food, water and shelter If only.... Thanks, Melton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . this is very well done my friend. . . you have found the right way to put it. . .and it speaks volumes. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is very thought-provoking. Right things said in the right way..that's how it should be! Keep writing! And Namaste :-) Neha |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm a people-watcher, and I've seen it all too much. You are very observant Sudhir. I love the way this reads. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much all of you... Regards, Sudhir |
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