Open Poetry #20 |
Come Sun Rise |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Come Sun Rise By Larry Chadwick Each morning comes again, As always it has done. The day comes bright, With the rising of the sun. I greet you with my love, It’s said because it’s true. Reminder of the way I feel, Even though you knew. So daily I express myself, To be as faithful as the sun. Who can tell the outcome, When the day is finally done? Never should there be a doubt, As each day passes by. Never should there be regrets, That makes you want to cry. For seldom is there warning, About how life will end. So when it’s finally over, No broken hearts to mend. April 23, 2002 It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Larry, I loved this......it made me cry. ~Laura~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Never should there be a doubt, As each day passes by. Never should there be regrets, That makes you want to cry.'' Even though this is written in a tender mood, I just found it so striking to realize so much can be a regret.. ..lovely Larry~ Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Great thought, Larry! Life and love are too precious to disparage or waste. Thanks for making a note of this... Shenachie |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwwwwww, Larry, this is so wonderful what a romantic heart you have |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Parisgrl, Don't cry... How sweet and tender you are. Thanks. Lauren, It sure can...but only if you let it. Thanks Shenachie, Somebody needed to. LOL And thanks. Susan, I thought you'd never notice! And thanks a bunch. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
In all of this, there is nothing left to question, but that it should come back to the top, again, and again |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If only we could go through life with no regrets at the end..would be nice..to live each day as if the last... nicely done Larry ~Victoria
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry, You are a placate poet. Enjoyed the wrie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
For seldom is there warning, About how life will end. So when it’s finally over, No broken hearts to mend. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Larry how very very true! Love this piece....sure do! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"For seldom is there warning, About how life will end. So when it’s finally over, No broken hearts to mend." (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words shine with both love and wisdom! I know your love will always be blessed by the faithfulness you offer her, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Decaflame, What a very nice thing to say! Thanks. Victoria, Yeah...fat chance huh? LOL Thanks. Sy, Not guilty... Thanks. Nancy Lee, Thanks so very much...always. Vandana, Bless you for always reading. Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Well I wouldn't say always. Afterall...it is poetry. Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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