Open Poetry #20 |
A House of Tears |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Standing within four walls now bare left to wonder, to worry and fret to walk and wait, with no one there time oozing along, not there yet Gloom turning walls from white to black shudders closed against stark of day wait in anguish, watching my back soap suds futile, won’t wash away Silence engulfs the room and halls bringing a ring and hiss to ears crossing the floor and climbing walls smothering gladness, birthing fears Laughter once heard, now remembered of times when smiles covered the faces and eyes shone bright, sparkled, glimmered Sadness was gone without traces A house can hold the happiness of a family without strife of tenderness and sweet caress between two souls, husband and wife. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You keep getting better and better. A wonderful write. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Happiness is not always going on in my house but we try! Loved this Barry, I hope you and your wife are very happy. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your heart positively sings in this, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You reach my heart and make the sadness of this piece echo thru my mind. Good job Magnus! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I miss those smiling faces too..very touching barry..hugss..enjoyed very much ~Victoria |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The mind sees, the heart feels and the soul cries ... a most soulfelt part of you, good to read you again. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Mr. M: A home is where you hang your hat, but if there is no love there - then it really isn't a home. Loved your words: "A house can hold the happiness of a family without strife of tenderness and sweet caress between two souls, husband and wife" Ariana |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ what the eyes can not see, the heart feels....peace to you... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Laughter once heard, now remembered of times when smiles covered the faces and eyes shone bright, sparkled, glimmered Sadness was gone without traces" relating in many ways |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, you okay? Sure hope so... Well done but a sad write my friend. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy.....just letting my hair down and out a little....All is OK here in SC....perfect? NO....but far from not OK.... Thanx for the thoughts... Yepper...we is fine... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, you sound so sad behind these words, I hope everything is okay, for I know families can always quarrel and have their hard times, but I know it takes time to settle the differences and love will only grow! (sigh) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Silence engulfs the room and halls bringing a ring and hiss to ears crossing the floor and climbing walls smothering gladness, birthing fears My goodness, this poem is exquisite... *~coco~* |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Indeed, a home IS what is made of it, and a house is just four walls. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like the idea that time oozes and soap suds are futile. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Magnus...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ You do this so well ... thank you for being a poet~ 'Laughter once heard, now remembered' Beautiful thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - if only the walls could talk - right? How well I do understand that a house is not a home when he...or she is no longer there. Well done sir. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so good to read your wonderful words again....It takes the love of two to make a house of smiles.....I hope one day to create a home that will be void of tears...Magnificent writing, Barry....I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your words always move me and stir up many emotions. You make the reader feel like they are going through the pain with you. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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