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Open Poetry #20

Naked Silence

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-04-23 01:54 PM

The room sketched
In it
Three irate hearts.
Austere subject.
Yet, turquoise light
Indicates go.
Agitated I stood,
Protected by temperament.
Flames traipsed from lips
Cranium’s ego infiltrated.
These lifelong
Friendships tested.
The clarity of ones
Point the pivot of it all.
My bellow for peace,
Concealed by timid lips.
While eyes pendulum
Between this fuming pair.
Friends…My friends.
Then its uttered.
The unthinkable notion.
Wretched meaning.
Implicating.
Confiscates with
Breath's dissonance.
Making an exodus
Are all words and sounds.
Trio we now stand
saturated
In naked silence.

copyright ©2002 hayden a. james

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-04-23 02:18 PM

HaydenJames~

'These lifelong
Friendships tested.
The clarity of ones
Point the pivot of it all.
My bellow for peace,
Concealed by timid lips.
While eyes pendulum
Between this fuming pair.
Friends…My friends.'

Unique perspective ... felt the torture of the 'timid lips'~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-04-23 08:47 PM

I appreciate your direct vision and keen edged style. ThisDiamond

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

3 posted 2002-04-23 09:12 PM

thanks much.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

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