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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-22 07:02 PM


Drowning in her memory of pain
Suffocating in the blanket of her fears
living only to die

Every breath taken is a wish of sudden death
her eyes clouded, never wanting to see.
Broken by love her soul weeps in the shadows of her
Agony.

Her tear stained face, covered with a plastered smile. never wanting to be cared for, she sinks away in the sand of her own stubborness

Worthless,not wanted, stupid. Words that dig deep into her mind by her own fist. walking only to stand still, still in the untrue love she gets.

Hearing me speak hearing the words i say considering their truth but only for a brief moment. Stairing at me with her eyes wide shut.

She Lies in her bed day after day night after night hurting herself. slowly killing herself, the tounge of a shaddered spirt cuts close.


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Even if this dosent make sence to you its meaning is to not let your friends wallow away in their self pity because a guy decided to not be with them. My friend Is going through it right now and its tough for her because all she has known about guys in that they are jerks


~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

[This message has been edited by Guardurthoughts (04-22-2002 07:05 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-22 07:52 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Erica, this is soooooo heartbreaking, yes, we must awlays reach out and support our friends when they are in great anguish for it is love that comforts us all and we must help each other when we need it the most! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Etica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-05-17 01:44 PM




        Dawn

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3 posted 2002-05-17 01:46 PM


You need to start a band!   That's my solution to everything. Enjoyed yr post.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-17-2002 01:49 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-05-17 01:47 PM


Your piece would have greater readability if you corrected your typos and spelling errors

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-17 04:30 PM


Yes and no one will ever convince her any different until she finds a good one...I hope she finds a faithful one...James
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