Open Poetry #20 |
Hope for a Friend... |
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
She thinks aloud with classical purity, Walks with her soul in hand… Loves with inconveniently tender conscience, Subsides faith at forced touch of a man… Courage, chaos, substitution for abuse, She treads the precipice thin of Fate… Wilted upon imperious summons, Calloused hands have taught her to Hate… Shifted, Unseen, Like a grasp from a dream- Upon Waking… May you find your peace soon… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This too saddens me so much to see so many women taken advantage of and abused this way, sweet friend, my heart goes out to her and so many others and I wish peace to come her way! (sigh) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a strong and beautiful poem, Devina. Peace Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The title grabbed me...I could use a dose of that myself! I like this style on you, my sister. This is a wonderful expression of the sweetness of your soul. Hugs, you. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I like the style of this too..enjoyed, and its wonderful to see you around. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Peace will be found when direction like this is given. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
there is strength in these words....wonderful writing. *s* Like a red brick, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
peace will always be found. . . the signs are there. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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