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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-04-22 12:47 PM



(Haiku)

Anticipation

Hands move up my arms
neck waits for the magic there
fingers wrapped in hair
Connie McDonald

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Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2002-04-22 01:46 PM



Anticipation II

Eyes meet swirling pools
Reflections of inner souls,
Mingle thoughts at touch.


Gloom

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-04-22 07:08 PM


: )
beautiful...
Thank You
~~ Connie ~~

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3 posted 2002-05-17 01:45 PM


This is a beautiful haiku.

                               Dawn

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4 posted 2002-05-17 01:54 PM


At first I thought Connie McDonald was part of the haiku. Y'know, it shows yr name at the blue edge underneath yr poem, so y' don't need it. But I really enjoyed th' haiku. Thanks for sharin' it here.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Zinsser
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5 posted 2002-05-17 06:54 PM


Thanks for your comments....
sometimes when I post it mashes everything together even when I try to edit it  LOL  Oh Well...   : )
Thanks again....

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