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Open Poetry #20

Anticipation

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-04-22 12:47 PM

(Haiku)

Anticipation

Hands move up my arms
neck waits for the magic there
fingers wrapped in hair
Connie McDonald

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-04-22 01:46 PM

Anticipation II

Eyes meet swirling pools
Reflections of inner souls,
Mingle thoughts at touch.

Gloom

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-04-22 07:08 PM

: )
beautiful...
Thank You
~~ Connie ~~

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2002-05-17 01:45 PM

This is a beautiful haiku.

Dawn

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-17 01:54 PM

At first I thought Connie McDonald was part of the haiku.

Y'know, it shows yr name at the blue edge underneath yr poem, so y' don't need it. But I really enjoyed th' haiku. Thanks for sharin' it here.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2002-05-17 06:54 PM

Thanks for your comments....
sometimes when I post it mashes everything together even when I try to edit it LOL Oh Well... : )
Thanks again....

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