Open Poetry #20 |
Withdrawing |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What do you do, when you get so down You can’t get up no matter how hard you try After trying so hard to keep yourself up You end up feeling like you just want to cry Withdrawing from all the world outside Never going out into the daylight Depression finally gets the best of you These feelings I do continuely fight So many things I have inside my head They seem so jumbled up inside But, to get them all out on paper I just can not seem to write |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, I know this feeling all so well, believe me, and I believe that the best way to get through this situation is to write iout everything you feel in rambles, for we will always be here for you when you need someone to talk to, you will always be a friend in me! (kiss on cheek) You are a true angel, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ You 'get them all out on paper' and share with friends~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sit down. . . and begin. . . that's it. . . this is a start. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick, If you can write this you can write others. Well done enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I share the feeling...you are not alone. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - I share your feelings well. Just when I think I'm alone with these feelings, I see others are also with them. Peace be with you my friend... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You can write hon..remember you are a smartchick ~Victoria |
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