Open Poetry #20 |
Stolen Moments |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
As I read on, I had no idea there were “Stolen Moments” his words, Stolen Moments we shared. I did not know how to respond: So I just read--(from the NoteBook) "I’d rather feel you combing my hair with your fingers feeding me Greek black olives" "Or maybe what ever we find in the refrigerator" "We laughed about the brown pinto after waxing it the 8 track still works turn it up" (I hear the laughter) "I ache for you when you aren’t around, when you aren’t singing Faith Hill in my ears you know, the love stuff I only admit this to you” “A vision of loveliness in my Yankees cap and denim shirt to me, you are the way your hair falls, softly framing your face, and caressing your shoulders, if I could paint, even draw-- I have it framed in my mind, and heart - you more then a lover -I laying beside you watching you breathe “To awake in morning dawn wrapped in you” Just to hear you say you love me" (FH) Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-19-2002 11:48 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wow.... this one I am saving.... spoke to me for several reasons and left me remembering more than I should have.... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Memories worth recording and recalling. Sweet write! |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Your heart is an open book in this one, Lauren...all I could think of what a lucky guy he is and I hope he knows it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
“A vision of loveliness in my Yankees cap and denim shirt to me, you are the way your hair falls, softly framing your face, and caressing your shoulders, if I could paint, even draw-- I have it framed in my mind, and heart - you more then a lover -I laying beside you watching you breathe" (smiles) And I did think of Faith Hill's "Breathe" reading this, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) May you always share such lovely moments like these with your love and breathe forever in rapture, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Ron~ I am probably sharing far too much, but as of lately its the only way....I appreciate your thoughts, I hope the remembering wasnt painful.... ~~ Larry~ its my way of dealing with life right now....thanks friend... ~~ Opeth~ sadly, the statement you made is far from the truth, I am learning....thank you for making me smile... ~~ Noah~ I too heard the same song, I so APPRECIATE you... Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-19-2002 12:25 PM).] |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
If would seem that we had the same idea. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Lauren this is..this is...captivating.. I felt almost intrusive..quietly listening... this spoke to me of many stolen moments which haunt my own thoughts. Beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Lauren..beautifully done as always hugs ~Victoria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you listen to the quiet very well my friend. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes sweet moments of sharing...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I have never seen myself in the shoes of a theif, until now. Such thoughts are a gem, .... precious in all forms. Keep the "Faith". Talk soon!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, I this lots. Good work. Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I knew when I stole a moment to get back in here and I searched your words out I would find something lovely and soothing, but I didn't know I would find such a treasure dear friend....I felt every word of this and in silence sent you a hug and a wish for peace. Miss you dear friend. Hugs. ~D~ Like a red brick, |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Green Eyes: i got into the moment with you on this, daydreaming to the point you even inspired a poem about pulling out some stolen moments. Perhaps i will post it soon, making sure you get the credit for the inspiration. Name your own superlative for this wonderful poem you wrote! JkF |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think you've seen through my eyes, but far more than my own saw...I'm thankful I saw through yours... jwesley |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful...thoroughly enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thanks to all....and thank you for letting me "vent" whether in a happy mood, or not, I am most appreciative of the support and friends I have found among these pages.... Love to all... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into a ocean of you, what if told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-22-2002 11:00 PM).] |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
Lauren - as usual, this is truly captivating and beautiful. i am sad to see you having such trouble, though. we're all here for you if you need us (i am sure i speak for everyone here.) -Dave |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dave~ Thank you my friend, for your tender thoughts....appreciate them.. Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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