Open Poetry #20 |
The writer is my heart |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
When my heart became the writer and each daily thought my pen The passions, which my heart had lost, revealed themselves again I found my lost convictions which were buried deep within I discovered many changes and a new place to begin I found the thoughts of hidden well consume the parchment white I found relief consume my heart as more I came to write I was freed of all my devils and the torments made of day My heart is now the writer and my thoughts now pen away |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Rick~ Yes exactly, always let your heart write!! its beautiful... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rick "I found the thoughts of hidden well consume the parchment white I found relief consume my heart as more I came to write" For a poet, to write it down, completes. Enjoyed your thoughts here. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rick your absolutely right, when we leave the troubles of the day and write our hearts....wonderful.. Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) {on the wings of words our spirits fly...and our souls are free....me.} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-21-2002 11:16 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You say this exactly perfectly, Rick. I feel the same. It's amazing how therapeutic writing is. Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick It's as though you took the words right out of my mouth with this. I'm sure each and every one of us can relate to this. I love reading your words of wisdom. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I found relief consume my heart as more I came to write Rick - Exactly!! Good one. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Rick...Scrumptous poem!!!!! Just love the way your words dance across the heart and bloom within the mind...***Ivy Rose |
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