Open Poetry #20 |
Just Because |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Just because smiles are long and touches are so few Doesn’t mean love’s not strong for dear, I do love you When the words are only felt within the mind and heart Life’s moments in cards dealt keep fingertips apart. I keep you here within this heart for time to hold I keep you here again My love of you is told I let you have my thought I give it to you freely A diamond of words bought which I treasure deeply I take you in my trek through each waking day and you know what the heck I’ll love you anyway |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a treasure for a special someone, Mag! Very, very sweet indeed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
AH Barry..very nicely put... warm thoughts indeed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy oh what a wonderful piece of delight this is, have you any idea the joy I get from seeing one of your perfect poems? Perhaps you might have some clue, since I cannot do subtle, and those delicate nuances of appreciation just aren’t my style. Obviously I’m a typically English soul, quite unassuming, and more than capable of fading silently into the background. NOT Anyway this is another utterly utterly perfectly penned poem from you and I absolutely love it. Thank you for my making my day, truly exceptional. As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, Awww. I love this! ] Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When the words are only felt within the mind and heart Life’s moments in cards dealt keep fingertips apart. You say it so well Magnus! Truly a man of passion you are!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Barry, What the heck...it is a good write! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Barry, This is the real deal. Your words are such a tribute to the love of your life. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is such a beautifully heartfelt write, sweet friend, what the heck! is always a simply lovely way to put it and quite enough too! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this one hit me better than the others you've written, I think...like another side of you. I like it lots! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ Soft indeed you have that way with words....such beautiful thoughts... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry How wonderful it is to have such an unconditional and beautiful love such as yours. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Magnus, this is such a sweet thing to write. A very heartfelt poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just the thought of thinking of another, such a gift, such a treasure...such a heartfelt poem... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely, gentle read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Very, very, nice!!! Soothing words, words that convey how love lives in the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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