Open Poetry #20 |
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Just Because |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Just because smiles are long and touches are so few Doesn’t mean love’s not strong for dear, I do love you When the words are only felt within the mind and heart Life’s moments in cards dealt keep fingertips apart. I keep you here within this heart for time to hold I keep you here again My love of you is told I let you have my thought I give it to you freely A diamond of words bought which I treasure deeply I take you in my trek through each waking day and you know what the heck I’ll love you anyway |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a treasure for a special someone, Mag! Very, very sweet indeed. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
AH Barry..very nicely put... warm thoughts indeed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy oh what a wonderful piece of delight this is, have you any idea the joy I get from seeing one of your perfect poems? Perhaps you might have some clue, since I cannot do subtle, and those delicate nuances of appreciation just aren’t my style. Obviously I’m a typically English soul, quite unassuming, and more than capable of fading silently into the background. NOT Anyway this is another utterly utterly perfectly penned poem from you and I absolutely love it. Thank you for my making my day, truly exceptional. As always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, Awww. I love this! ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When the words are only felt within the mind and heart Life’s moments in cards dealt keep fingertips apart. You say it so well Magnus! Truly a man of passion you are!!! |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Barry, What the heck...it is a good write! ![]() It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Barry, This is the real deal. Your words are such a tribute to the love of your life. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) This is such a beautifully heartfelt write, sweet friend, what the heck! is always a simply lovely way to put it and quite enough too! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this one hit me better than the others you've written, I think...like another side of you. I like it lots! |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ Soft indeed you have that way with words....such beautiful thoughts... ![]() Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry How wonderful it is to have such an unconditional and beautiful love such as yours. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Magnus, this is such a sweet thing to write. A very heartfelt poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just the thought of thinking of another, such a gift, such a treasure...such a heartfelt poem... |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely, gentle read. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Very, very, nice!!! Soothing words, words that convey how love lives in the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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