Open Poetry #20 |
Curse of the Dead |
AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
I wish I could escape this feeling i know I shouldn't hate but really if he hadn't killed them i would still be dreaming but for now my life is a nightmare the curse of the dead this feeling of dread these feelings that are kept bottled up inside this feeling of dread is stuck in my head i know he must be feeling this way too |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Welcome to Passions. You'll like it here. Nice first post, I enjoyed it! ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
AceoConas, welcome to passions, this is a very intense piece. I hope to hear more of your writing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the forums....I hope you read the guidelines and feel you can join our group!! If you have any questions, please feel free to contact any of the Moderators. |
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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
Man, I didn't think i'd be accepted!! |
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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
PdV, you did see my THANK YOU!!, didn't you? ~* Aceo *~ [This message has been edited by AceoConas (04-20-2002 10:28 PM).] |
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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
I just want to put this in my library. ~* Aceo *~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh John, this is such a sad but powerful debut poem, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone who copes with these feelings! This is an excellent powerful first post, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet John, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your wonderful words! (big huggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Welcome! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. It was a sad write, but you expressed an emotion that needs to be set free. Now be prepared to answer some questions about Alaska. I live in the Fairbanks area, but will soon be heading to the Colorado Rockies. I'll turn my keys to the freezer over to you when I leave. Welcome to these blue poetry pages. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very well done first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HI there-- Welcome to the Blue Pages, of a strong family....you will love it here!! Hauntingly Sad, and very well written.....I hope you enjoy it here....be well Peace to you... Lauren~ Step through the |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi there Nicely written poem you've shared with us! Welcome to Passions, I know you will absolutely love it here. Please check your email for a special greeting. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions - have fun!! You know...curses such as this CAN be lifted. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! It is certainly not hard to stay around...have a love of poetry, a bit of wit, and you'll find here, the perfect fit! Glad to have you aboard! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello and welcome. You have an interesting opening here, and I look forward to reading your work. Enjoy the talent and topics of these pages, a gift we are all graced to take part in. ThisDiamond |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Welcome AceoConas, loved your poem. I'll be looking forward to see more Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
I didn't think everyone would like my poetry. I have also posted the first part of a book on Prose. Check it out!! Aceo [This message has been edited by AceoConas (04-23-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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