Open Poetry #20 |
Runaway |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I'm not coming back this time You can't make me see the light You may think that you are right But I've stepped into the night Cannot reach me in your bed Cannot teach me, I am dead I have found the friends I seek Cold and dark and I am weak Saw myself inside a star Wonder Wonder where you are Saw myself I'm falling fast Someone wished it wouldn't last Maybe I could turn back now But I will not milk that cow Now I've left and I am gone Do not know the road I'm on Someone Someone what to do Someone Someone be like you Someone Someone save my soul Someone Someone make me whole The record spins in this street Connecting veins in my feet Doubt is clouding in my mind Now it’s raining on my shine But its dark and I can't see Wishing you were more like me No one likes to show you how Do the things you do yourself Begin... I do not know how to go It’s too late to go back home Within... Saw myself I'm falling fast Someone wished it wouldn't last Who wins? Who wins? Who wins? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The record spins in this street Connecting veins in my feet Doubt is clouding in my mind Now it's raining on my shine But its dark and I can't see Wishing you were more like me ================================== those lines spoke to me Walt... or I should say sang to me... very cool cadenced write poet sir how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
No one wins especially when you run... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
walt, this could be a rock song! I love it, you're expression is exquisite! (hugs) |
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