Open Poetry #20 |
Inspiration |
Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Inspiration a gust of wind a guttural nuance suggestive of more air to move the leaves in the whirling breeze that calls men to open or shut their cloaks and accept or reject the confluence of the influence of the quiet word spoken that I watch grow in the telling to gale force and ruffle the dervish cycles that dance to tunes sung into a hurricane that in the end sends leaves, trees and planes scudding across our landscape and into our towers for the power of an idea insane jealousy and religious fervor and I watch and weep © Bart Breen 2002 never try to teach a pig to sing it wastes your time AND annoys the pig [This message has been edited by Canuckster (04-19-2002 10:15 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey B. What an intriguing write. It leaves me wondering if I am somehow missing something? The language was quite eloquent, and I thought the shape lent to the read... (reads nicely aloud, btw) But it did end up somewhere quite unexpected for me. (I guess inspiration quite often does, hmmm?) Oh and if you don't mind me asking, was there further meaning implied in the shape? (Why am I typing like doreen? ) I did enjoy much. A compelling read, m'friend. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Astonishing insight. The flow reminded me of the endless strand of a braided gold bracelet...the kind of treasure that is art in itself and itself art. ThisDiamond. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
the wind . . . the fervor . . . the storm an interesting view minaret? Kraw' "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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