Open Poetry #20 |
In us forever |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
What if I was told that I had three days to live Unresolved destiny so much energy but so little time Would I heal my soul in those 72 hours and change what must be change to leave behind a better me Or would I keep the same profile and just wait to die impatiently But maybe every hour would have a purpose every minute an embrace Only memories remain in the memories of those that I show love Because love is not to be told but to be shown and I'll make sure everyone knows how much I love them It should not be about me but about that which remains after me The flesh dissolves with all its sins forever but the rest remains in the soul in the spirit in others |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this is an incredibly provoking piece, sweet friend, I too wish we could always love unconditionally and as though there was no tomorrow and find penitence for all the sins we labor and help cleanse it all from our hearts! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light alays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . very wise words my friend. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Extreme! The thoughts you breath to the pages are amazing. Enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Walker....this is beyond doubt...one of your most moving and powerful I have read!!!!!!! |
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