Open Poetry #20 |
A Woman Like You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“A WOMAN LIKE YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Walked the beach many times, alone inside, missing something… Just strolling along on the sand, watching the gentle surf coming… You were lying there, on a blanket, deep in your thoughts it seemed… Long hair, tempting eyes, face pleasing, thought this was only when I dreamed… Smiles from your lips spoke to me, knew I’d found someone special… Walking the beach this one time, a woman like you, lighting the candle… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiles from your lips spoke to me, knew I’d found someone special… Walking the beach this one time, a woman like you, lighting the candle… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bill! This one goes from a sultry glance to a sizzle.... Love it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yet another of your softly sensual and well done mysterious writes Bill C. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is gorgeous, it simply flows with pure and wondrous love, it’s so special to read such a divine piece of poetry written by your expert hand. Again the master of romance writes using his pen of grace. Absolutely excellent darling boy. Superb writing, as smooth as the silk Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, you truly are our king of romance, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) May you and your love forever share true love shappiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-19-2002 07:26 PM).] |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You captured the beauty and sweetness of the moment you first meet that special someone. Lovin' this! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey B.C.--I missed the romance of your meter. And I did smile as I read this, knowing that there must be a dozen women, all hoping this was penned with them in mind! Wonderful and sweetly seductive, m'friend. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A tune played as I read this sweet piece. You have a wonderful way of dipping the pen into your heart and filling the page. ThisDiamond |
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