Open Poetry #20 |
Why Must It Be? |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Why does it always seem to be so difficult and hard to see? Why can’t I make the right choices and once be heard over these voices? Why does my heart say I don’t know? Must it be this, just let it go? Why do the tears fall from an eye? Yes, I ask simply, tell me why? I feel so helpless, I cannot move I feel so alone, out of the groove I think my choice, isn’t the one Why, oh why...can’t it just be done? I rack my brain, my soul does scream I sometimes feel, is this a dream? I have no way to say my thought Is life a lemon that I bought? Somehow...I know it will once pass and life again will be mended glass But now I just sit here and wonder Why, oh why is my life asunder? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I feel so helpless, I cannot move I feel so alone, out of the groove I think my choice, isn’t the one Why, oh why...can’t it just be done? Exactly my thoughts today. Well done, Magnus. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, me thinks thou asks too many questions for a beautiful Friday! Good write my friend! ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (04-19-2002 01:56 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Duncan....This is a trying day... some hard decisions being made this week. No right answers....only the best ones I know.... Yes Nancy, the day is beautiful...send a hug... Hugs to you... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done Barry..enjoyed your words..and hope you enjoy the weekend hugs ~Victoria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
one might say that life gets torn asunder so that it can be put back together. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Only know that it happens to all of us...and the way we deal with it shows us who we are...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - I wonder about this also, sometimes inside it's a battle wondering... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Barry, I too always question why the path ahead is always so camouflaged to us all and only anticipation can help us face the inevitable, this is very thought-provoking! (smiles) Always trust your instincts and everything will feel so right in the long run, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy Oh my I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and form in this is absolutely excellent. I’m sitting here with my mouth making a silent oh of awe. This is really beautiful writing. YOU do KNOW I simply LOVE your writing don’t you? I can actually feel the depth of this, this is utterly utterly wonderful. Truly awesome writing you are always a fabulous writer. Utterly utterly exquisite, maybe one day I suppose I’m gong to read your words and the magic connection between eye and heart will be gone. But not today and I hope not for a long long time, possibly that day will come when I start writing short replies. smileAbsolutely perfect darling boy Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Peace to you Barry~ will keep ya in thoughts while you make those decisions.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Everyone has there times where they question the ups and downs of life. I've certainly had mine. You express this well! Good job! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I will refrain from singing a chorus of "High Hopes" (smile?) Seems you wrote this from the bottom of the pit, my friend. Heartfelt hugs to you Mag. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx to all of you...and to Serenity... YES...from the bottom, but I am climbing out...thank you... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
trip, slip, flip hard to keep a grip when decisions go wrong and more will come along Kraw' "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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