»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #20
»
of seduction
| Open Poetry #20 |
|
of seduction |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
wear worthy my testimony of bane where on distant annoyance I wriggled a dragon ship with folded oars like wreath on flaccid sea encircled my mind of winebibbed thoughts beveraged to pliant syrup of wing as a windjammer marooned a braggart my heart voice diminutive in allure I poured my virtue down the gullet of your waiting gait with vocable rhyme and you lapped it wanton with virago virgo nullifying my curse of chastity with vampish bold bewitcher of rapacity, vapor of protean you obscure the compass of my arrogance and fluctuate my remedy to watered sand you usher my soul to vanish in volatile blur and yet my solicitude is no Solomon waiting for the soot of your soother the black residue of your conjure wear well the lament of your sombre knight and on morrow rise with side glance amusement ©Dark |
||
| © Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, yes......painting those vivid pictures on a captivating canvas......giving the observer morsels to chew over.....love this, how your sombre knight expresses himself!! It's enticing...... The music is playing...it's your time to dance! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-19-2002 06:14 AM).] |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...after the amuse, do take care to watch what is poured into the morning brew... very clever, very you... |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunnyone, bless your eyes and your fingers for the touches, thank you Sunshine, be careful with that coffee I have been known to drive reckless...thank you ms morning |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS "I poured my virtue down the gullet of your waiting gait with vocable rhyme and you lapped it wanton with virago virgo nullifying my curse of chastity with vampish bold" The English language curves to your meaning, like trees following a river. Enjoyed this. |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"and yet my solicitude is no Solomon waiting for the soot of your soother the black residue of your conjure wear well the lament of your sombre knight"   :(smiles) You are a true master of language and voice in writing, sweet friend, you always amaze me with the knighthood and honest feel you always give your thoughts, this is excellent! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is another classic for your lovely library! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You master words like an artist masters the canvas. This is one heck of a cool, vivid write. I have already read it three times and I find something new everytime. Very well done, poet  Also, I have read many of your poems before, but, I find that I'm at such a loss of expression that I rarely reply. My point is, that your talent blows me away, and, now you know  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Sitting here smiling at Melissa's reply and nodding* I too do the same thing... totally captivated by your words I sit speechless...unable to make my fingers move. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
