Open Poetry #20 |
Time To Cry |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Time To Cry Please don't love me can't you see? The answers you seek don't lay with me I’ve seen into your heart felt your pain and love Found a passionate soul reaching high above A shoulder to cry on some time to stay To share a smile then be on our way I've no more to give than a friend that's true To ask for more will only leave you blue the time now has come I must say goodbye And all I can give you is time you need to cry We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hopefully that is enough...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
yes, friendship is enough, for out of it, sometimes love grows.......well done, my friend! The music is playing...it's your time to dance! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there EagleOne It's been awhile and I just came back to take a peek but thought I'd stay awhile and catch up on some wonderful poetry from all you guys. Eddie this is absolutely beautiful a little sad but beautiful just the same...very well penned thoughts, well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You just came back and youre leaving already?? Well, at least you left us a sweet, sincere poem of honesty and friendship. Hey Eddie...good to see your name here! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eddie, this is so sad yet beautiful... sort of like smiling through tears. Nice to see you here again! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
neat how you've touched on friendship and the disappointments that go with it, good to see your writes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eddie This was wonderfully written and I'm sure many can relate to this. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eddie, this is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you both and I hope you have both found true joy to hold forever now and now new hope fills your heart! (sigh) We have all missed you so much, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're back, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
James ~ Hopefully! Sunnyone ~ I guess sometimes it does, thank you Tracie ~ Well I’m just back myself, so good to see you here again, take care! Janet ~ it seems I can’t stay away for too long my friend. Enchantress ~ Tears and smiles, yes it was something like that, thank you. Ecrivan ~ yeah, its never good to disappoint ones friends though. Sue ~ well I know I can my friend, thanks for stopping by. Noah ~ it was a difficult situation all round, good to be back. We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Oh. The aching honesty. Hearts Eddie, glad that you're writing, and posting, this is felt. *Peace you. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Alicia ~ Hey there my friend! It's been a while, hope all is well. Yes, I needed to get this one out. Thanks, and take care! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles [This message has been edited by EagleOne (04-20-2002 10:47 PM).] |
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AceoConas Junior Member
since 2002-04-20
Posts 27AK, anchorage |
Your poem was great!!!Keep writing!! ~* Aceo *~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thanks! Writing is something I just have to do! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It sounds as if someone was just wanting a bit more of the Eagle than a sheltering wing, and a wing is all you were offering. Can't blame them though, you do have a great big heart, ya know! And it's good to see your name flying around in here again! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sometimes it is hard to keep friendship and love apart. That doesn't make sense really but I am sure you understand. I like the write, Eddie. Glad you just have to do it. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eddie..most enjoy seeing your name in the blue my friend... this is a difficult one...giving one the time to cry..the space to go where they need to go...being a friend--only.... *sigh*...love is a difficult thing my friend..we travel on... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Eddie darling boy this is such superb writing. Utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty, sad in places, because it’s hard to put restrictions on what you feel, but very necessary to draw the line sometimes. You always are an excellent writer, I’ve missed you darling boy, don’t stay away so long please. This is an absolutely beautiful and perfect example of all your posts, perfectly divine I love it. YOU really do have an amazing ability to write of emotion so the reader understands completely. Thank you for this gem Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Eddie, all we can do is offer ourselves unconditionally in friendship, and if it turns into more then that is wonderful, and if it does not...then we have to be true to ourselves and still be that friend.....unconditionally. Well done my friend, good to see you again. Like a red brick, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eddie, such a soft and beautiful write. I think under your wings would be a perfect place to shelter from the storms of life and that you offer a time to cry as well...magic. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Midnitesun ~ yeah, it was a bit that way, it’s good be back. Dee ~ yes, I do understand my friend, thank you. passing shadows ~ tears and a thank you, a not all that strange combination g ~ life is difficult my friend, good to see you again too! Marsha ~ ya know I could easily get used to that “darling boy” thank you, take care! Gentle Spirit ~ to be true to oneself is often the most difficult of all Kethry ~ but who would shelter me? Thank you We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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