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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-18 09:35 PM

“ABOUT YOU LOVING ME”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Wanted to share,
some of my dreams…
Meet a charming woman,
live happily it seems…

Laugh, crying together,
what it’s all about…
Coaxing her lovely smile,
from a little pout…

Sharing, and caring,
ways I desire too…
Loving this woman,
wanting it to continue…

Thoughts I have though,
regarding your company…
Share with me feelings,
about you loving me…
~~~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-18 09:38 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo beautifully compassionate, sweet friend, all the time I too would always like to be reminded by my Joanna how much she loves me just as I always love her so much just to know how special I feel with her! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may you always find true loves declaration in each others hearts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-18-2002 09:39 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-04-18 09:39 PM

As always, your skill glistens the page...there is an interesting twist here that I didn't expect...those nagging choices.
Best Wishes, ThisDiamond

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-04-18 09:56 PM

Bill - oooh this just might be my favourite so far - it's going in my library! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2002-04-18 10:22 PM

Hmmm..I like the twist..I enjoy the whole thing..but intriguing ending, no doubt! Big smiles!

Sincerely,
Regina

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-04-18 10:32 PM

Bill...Very beautiful, passionate poem. Sometimes passion is more when we are seeking someone to love. This poem accentuates this perfectly. ***Ivy Rose

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-04-18 10:50 PM

Wonderful writing here Bill.
Love the twist at the end.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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