Open Poetry #20 |
This Crazy Guitar |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“THIS CRAZY GUITAR” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When I play these chords, thoughts enter inside me… Close my eyes, a vision forms, your face is what I see… No matter what I try to do, or the music I play or hear… I can’t really help myself, in my mind you appear… Heartbeats, of softer rain, everything of you I want… Not these hurting memories in my being, to haunt… This crazy guitar of mine, sings of new beginnings… Lonely past is gone within, today new awakenings… ~~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done BC....sounds much more positive than some..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soon you will play a new song...on that crazy guitar...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ Strum softly....but keep strumming, its beautiful... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Oh Bill, I'm so happy to see you again, I've missed reading your words so much and have missed you since I got to talk on the telephone with you earlier this month! (smiles) Yes, continue to play those blues always and let rock and roll fill your heart and make magic and hope sweep those chords you play so well! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-18-2002 06:00 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is utterly wonderful writing, the sheer beauty of these words caress my soul with delight. Your writing is always divinely painted in brilliant hues of crystal truths. I love it, I really do. The writing is as always perfect. Welcome home again, will you stay for longer this time, your writing is always missed, and so are you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This crazy guitar of mine, sings of new beginnings… Lonely past is gone within, today new awakenings… Good for you!! Leave the past where it belongs - in the past. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Bill. Love the sound of a guitar.... You should live closer and jam with my son. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Bill... I can't play the guitar... but how I do love to listen! *S* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
mind if I take a front row seat BC?? excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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