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Lover’s Knot spiral shape poem Krissy ?
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Lover’s Knot spiral shape poem Krissy ? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Lover’s Knot When two souls join in unity. They find such utter certainty. The peace that brings pure relief. Puts aside soul’s grief. Tears shed for what was not. Are healed by This lovers knot. All the pain that held you still. Is lost by this heart’s thrill. Unified in love’s Light. Held in Sheer delight. This is the bond of your soul. The lovers knot Makes you whole Marsha Krissy beloved daughter, how is that?MMmmm? A round of applause at least surely? How are you feeling now darling? A little green greener VERY GREEN. Don’t fret darling heart, would you like to see how it’s done? I’ll show you if you like. Hehehehehe 200 points, Your move beloved but I think you’ll find I win. AGAIN To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-18-2002 11:23 AM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
dramatic in its graphics ~ making for a knot of colors? A lover's knot was well expressed in your words. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Uh oh...there WILL be peace at the end of this rivalry, yes? Oh yes, for we want the both of you sharing perfection...and here you are, shaking it in front of us...LOL...here I am la-de-dah... and which is better? Will taking sides make any of us winners? I think not...so I shall just have to applaud the both of you as you write on... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, excellent poem...both perfect in form and expression...this is just simply beautiful! and yes this will be a hard one for krissy to beat but something tells me she'll come close if not match you hehe...so you best be thinking of your next write dearest sis of my heart. i see that talent runs in this family all over the place, magical dust in both your pens! im loving this... take care. i love you.  amy  "you can't stop |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) YAY!!! Oh Marsha, so much poetic talent shines in you and your family, this is a gorgeous lovers knot of words! (kiss on cheek) Now its Krissy's turn!!! (giggles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-18-2002 02:47 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - This is one of your best that I've read. But remember, Krissy does well and is an excellent poet... BC |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Right in my library this is going! You and your daughter seem to be neck and neck hehehehehe |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! Fantastic. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Marsha! Now to see what Krissy has for us... Enjoying this...I am! ~Hugs~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I do adore being all tangled in that knot...ummmmm...but Krissy IS gaining on you mushy...and me? Well, I am the fence sitter here...can't decide which I love better! ((hugs)) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
beloved one you took the test to prove you're better than the best you write these words of endless dream and therby win all my esteem the pretty patterns hide the thought of the wonder you have wrought and yet I know, perpacious me there's wonder in your poetry since you and Krissy came to town we are the winners all - hands down I love the spirit you possess in competition readiness though these words are soft and swift in me I find they reach the rift these words of yours touch my core offer healing evermore don't pretend you didn't know you used the knot to slow the flow having read both I'm now content to bathe in your fine wonderment a mother/daughter team of joy leaves me smiling you're envoy to spread the word of writer's skill found in both of you at will but love to me you are the best you know that your words have me impressed. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - are you sure that Krissy hasn't taught you these shape poems? BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great poem, Marsha... You certainly are good at those graphics... ~many colored hugs~Lyra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marsha, this is just awesome, Girl! Cool how you did the color thing. I loved this! BTW, does it feel good in that knot? Can't say I have ever really been there Again, great write, Marsha.Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i dunno bubbly one...krissy's not far behind ya....  but i really truly love this write! thanks for the reading material hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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