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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Essence Your fragrance reigns my brain. Directing it with simple ease Like scented flowers coaxing bees. I taste you on the mornings dew. Heed you on the winds abide And feel your essence deep inside. Inciting all my day's and nights Stirring love within my dream. Causing ripples in my stream. And from this lovely diadem. Glows a single candles light. That lights the shadows of my night. The candle holder is my heart Its been there from the very start. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes, I feel like I am THE ONLY ONE who has to work on meter...  (but that's just me feeling sorry for me) yergood.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity,   Away for the week end see ya monday. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I taste you on the mornings dew. Heed you on the winds abide And feel your essence deep inside. ===================================== And from this lovely diadem. Glows a single candles light. That lights the shadows of my night. The candle holder is my heart Its been there from the very start. =========================================== *sigh* * *SIGH* * *SIGH* * *SIGH* * *SIGH*  (OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS)  *winkiewinkie* Have a wonderful time at Nans Stinkylove... Make Michael & Randy behave on the plane. *L* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Seymour... a joy to read... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The candle holder is my heart Its been there from the very start. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful write here Sy.. love this beautiful closing couplet. Have a great time at Nan's!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ If I could choose a morning fragrance ... it would be the essence of your rhyme~ Divinely done~ *Hugs* ... *Safe and happy trip* Give Nan a BIG HUG from me~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, yes, and may she forever light your heart with her candle of love and help you see the essence of lifes light always! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. This is perfectly divine poetry, it flows like liquid light, illuming and bathing my soul in joy. Truly perfect the style and the construction is fabulous. Essentially this is the very essence of your soul, distilled into drops of wonder which cascade over my mind. Filling me with utter utter delight. You know I’m going to say that I love this utterly, outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utterly utterly perfect. Have a fabulous trip,  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Meter, Skeeter, I'm with Serenity...you make it look SO easy, Sy, and I for one AM the Queen of Klutz as I trip so easily over meter...stumbling all the way.... Thanks for this gem....[repost, please, The Golden Key...for all of our new folk...] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely, Sy...made me melt! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM Sighs back, Love ya WWRSCapt Hair, A joy to see your comment. Enchantress, Thank you dear, back monday. Marge, Will do. Noah, Thank you friend. Marsha, Going to visit Nan. Yours utterly back monday Sunshine, will be back monday. Love YaMartie, Will melt you again monday. Love Sy Vandana, Thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Sy...love the way you put it together....the rhyme scheme...meter superb as always... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional color and vitality. ThisDiamond |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfection!! Love this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, Seymour... I like this VERY much. *S* It's so beautiful and so tender... WOW!!! Enjoy your weekend tremendously! *S* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I see you have not lost your romantic touch, Sey. lovely. Cor |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Awesome... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just got back, to all the people I love thank you so much. I'll try to start catching up tomorrow. Love you all. |
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