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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Some Say ~*Marge Tindal*~ Some say it takes a Sonnet, I say a Villanelle to write the throngs of poetic songs drenching me in heart-cast spell~ This ink suits the poet well penning the thought of wishing naught Some say it takes a Sonnet, I say a Villanelle~ Words in spew of an ego-in-swell splash 'cross the page in poetic rage drenching me in heart-cast spell~ Heart spread wide in open flail dives into love with breath now held Some say it takes a Sonnet, I say a Villanelle~ In weave of thought from poet's inkwell word-bucket is filled to overflowing drenching me in heart-cast spell~ Pour of thoughts from springing well inking the very best of my best Some say it takes a Sonnet, I say a Villanelle drenching me in heart-cast spell~ *A little homework project from Passions In Poetry Workshop* Stop by the Poetry Workshop Forum and read some more ... then join the class and try your hand at it~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I like both sonnets and villanelles, but I've never written a villanelle (not one that I've finished anyway, lol). I enjoyed reading this Marge, nicely done.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a pretty sensible write o yuh |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done Marge! Enjoyed this tonight. ~Hugs~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SkyShine~ Thank you ... get thee to the Workshop ... you'll polish up one of those Villanelle's in a heartbeat~ Walt~ *giggling* so hard I can hardly write~ I'm framing your reply ... It isn't often my writing is referred to as 'sensible' ... never before as a matter of fact .... and me a blonde ... go figure~  I LOVE IT~Enchantress~ Thanks lady ... good to see you~ Drop in at the Workshop ... I think you'd enjoy joining us~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow!! This form is beyond me. You've done a superb job Margie girl!! Nice going!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ Gal ... I once thought the same thing ~ Come on down to the Poetry Workshop ... you'll love it~ *Hugs* and *THANKS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart Oh wow, YOU know how I feel about villanelles, the only reason I wrote one was because Krissy had. My aren’t we a competitive pair! Your villanelle is stunningly beautiful, perfect in form and execution wonderful writing absolutely perfect   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-18-2002 11:33 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You're SO FUN~ I don't know about 'perfection' ... but I did it anyhow~ Love ya', gal~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
marge, you do those vanilla-nellz well enjoyed your art here lady..thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ I genuinely thank you ... *giggles* at vanilla-nellz~ My friend, June, said she loved the thought of anything with a hint of vanilla in it~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oooooh.... my intended response vanished when I read June's comment on vanilla... add cinnamon and I'm in heaven. *G* This is great, Marge... I like it very much... and admire you for exploring new depths of your talent. *S* But... I've never considered myself a poet (Heads are nodding, dontcha just know it? *G*) My words are just offerings from my muse... Gifts thrust on my mind that I cannot refuse. For the giver keeps shoving them in my face Until I grab a pen (with minimum grace. *S*) An assembly line worker, I'm given the tools: Words tumbling out, disregarding all rules. I slap them together and send them on their way So they'll leave my thoughts and quit bothering my day... I've little concern for the harvest I reap When my muse has insomnia, for I need my sleep! *S* In other words... I'd be an AWFUL pupil! *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (04-18-2002 03:23 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ LOL-ing at myself ... did I just plain forget to thank you for ALL of your replies or what ?  Okie-Dokey gal ... I believe you ! How's about I should re-name this one Soma Say ? Tee-Hee ! ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just needing a relaxing time tonight ... and you know what ... I find that relaxation in the archives ... reading the poems of others and often finding one or two of my own that I actually LIKE ... this is one of them ... lots of hard work goes into 'form' for me ... it slows me down, for one thing, and is just plain downright GOOD DISCIPLINE to boot~ Anyhooooo ... I'm archiving ... and might even bump into that ADORABLE DIXIE DOODLE gal down here~  Hi Dixie~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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