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Accordionmaid
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0 posted 2002-04-17 05:41 PM




Ba-ba-ba baby I've loved you
Like moon, spoon and June
No man on this earth is above you
But, my ba-ba-ba ba-ah baboon
Is another story

Some of us poets get lonely
No one listens -- not even you
So, now, my poems I read only
To the monkeys at the zoo
And I'm leaving you...

...For my baboon
When I read, he begins to swoon
Oh, my baboon...

Though my new ba-ba baby is hairy
And must live in a cage
Our love for things literary
Makes us stars upon a stage
Oh, we shine so bright

So, why should I stay home
When I can go out and monkey around?
Oh, who will hear my poems
And realize they are profound?
Only my baboon...

...Oh my baboon
When I read, he begins to croon
Oh, my baboon...

~~~~~~~~~~

This song, written 12-22-01, is based on Ananova.com's story, "Poets pleased with response from baboons," which you will find at http://www.ananova.com/yournews/story/sm_476651.html

It's done like a 1950's-type of soft-rock ballad, in 4/4/ time, key of D-Major/B-minor.

(And, I really don't need a baboon, I have two dogs!)

"I think I go home."
(Garbo)

© Copyright 2002 Wendy Stanford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-17 05:47 PM


"The poetry of Lienlaf and Jorge del Río also provoked a response. During both readings the baboons climbed to the top of their tower and began shrieking.

The seven poets ended with an epic poem which they read. Mr Zurita said: "There was certainly a profound silence during that piece. At least that's how I remember it."




(smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is astounding, I believe that every creature on Earth is related to one another and I am delighted to read this wonderful article and your fabulous song, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) I too hope everyone else reads both your wonderful song and the editorial, awwwwwwww, those baboons must be sooooooo cute! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your song should be a Billboard hit, I'd love to hear you wail! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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2 posted 2002-04-17 06:33 PM


Accordianmaid darling heart Oh WOW when YOU write you really write, this is utterly utterly fabulous.

This really is utterly utterly fabulous writing YOU are indeed a writer. Thank you for this one


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


DawnG
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3 posted 2002-05-15 01:51 PM


I love it.

                   Dawn

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