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haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-04-17 04:26 PM

Long wishes
Sink softly
Upwards
Into the night sky
Deep and timid
Tinged white diamonds
Like a city distant
Jazzing a soothing
Migration of melodious
Thought.

Smiles patented by moment
Fling twilights
Into my sky
Now owned
By my cognac
Eyes.
Elevated
I’m pounded inside
With kisses
The beheld
Shimmering
Harbor
Docking memories
Of past skies shared.

Butterflies now
Rest
Cinnamon scents
Flowers closed
Light revealed
Felt as I’m touched
This ebb of night
Sky’s orchestra
Harmonized
Now I’m
Tongue tied
Fingers cry
Hands reaching out
To sky’s understanding
On me all the stars land.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-04-17 04:41 PM

nice imagery...and a nice flow of idea... I enjoyed!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-04-17 04:43 PM

Butterflies now
Rest
Cinnamon scents
Flowers closed
Light revealed
Felt as I'm touched
This ebb of night
Sky's orchestra
Harmonized
Now I'm
Tongue tied
Fingers cry
Hands reaching out
To sky's understanding
On me all the stars land.
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your imagery is stunning!!
this is beautiful in its poetic and romantic intend. Such longing and devotion.
wonderful employ of imagery and vocab.
fresh, innovative presentation.
Very well done poetsir.

how about how good it feels to finally forgive you
~~~
the moment I jumped off of it ... was the moment I touched down.

~Alanis Morissette~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2002-04-17 04:47 PM

Beautiful images in words that flow flawlessly... I like this very much! *S*

DawnG