Open Poetry #20 |
Heaven's symphony |
haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Long wishes Sink softly Upwards Into the night sky Deep and timid Tinged white diamonds Like a city distant Jazzing a soothing Migration of melodious Thought. Smiles patented by moment Fling twilights Into my sky Now owned By my cognac Eyes. Elevated I’m pounded inside With kisses The beheld Shimmering Harbor Docking memories Of past skies shared. Butterflies now Rest Cinnamon scents Flowers closed Light revealed Felt as I’m touched This ebb of night Sky’s orchestra Harmonized Now I’m Tongue tied Fingers cry Hands reaching out To sky’s understanding On me all the stars land. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice imagery...and a nice flow of idea... I enjoyed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Butterflies now Rest Cinnamon scents Flowers closed Light revealed Felt as I'm touched This ebb of night Sky's orchestra Harmonized Now I'm Tongue tied Fingers cry Hands reaching out To sky's understanding On me all the stars land. ================================= your imagery is stunning!! this is beautiful in its poetic and romantic intend. Such longing and devotion. wonderful employ of imagery and vocab. fresh, innovative presentation. Very well done poetsir. how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful images in words that flow flawlessly... I like this very much! *S* |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I love it. Dawn |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Thanks! *warm smile* My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello hayden I loved the images portrayed through your words. Great read! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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