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devina
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0 posted 2002-04-17 04:06 PM



I love of the explicit darkness
That is You…
I burn for the tender air
That you breathe…
I seethe of a poignant wanting
That was all but forgotten by me…

Never again did I expect to burn-
To find rebirth as the Phoenix oft’ did,
Sizzling from firelight to dawn’s crest-
Your beauty reminds me that it is so…


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2002 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-17 04:11 PM


this is a reminder that anyone would love to get. . .

you know, I've really missed reading you. . . it's good to do so again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2002-04-17 04:47 PM




(smiles) Yay, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, there is always hope in love and may it always blossom in your heart like that phoenix and fill you with happiness forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-17 05:11 PM


hmmm remind me to look up your other poems.. enjoyed this one so much have to see what the others are like


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4 posted 2002-06-01 03:20 PM


I can't believe I missed this one D...this is a beautiful piece of work!!

*You and that man of yours!!!*

ethome
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5 posted 2002-06-01 03:27 PM


Devina

You burn with passionate brillance in this torrid emotional reminder!

RSEvans
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6 posted 2002-06-01 05:12 PM


short and extremely sweet, T.  Thanks.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-06-01 05:27 PM


Very nice devina...James
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8 posted 2002-06-01 06:24 PM


enjoy your read
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