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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-05-31 10:38 PM





*Thank you AGAIN my dear friend~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2002-05-31 10:42 PM



You knew of course that I would love this tremendously, how could I not.

Love, Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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ThUnDeRkYsS
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2 posted 2002-05-31 10:46 PM


Wonderful again my friend, short sweet and filled with sunshine

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Marsha
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3 posted 2002-05-31 10:46 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul and healer of the night,  OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder. Again the picture matched to your words is simply exquisite, always you shine like the star you are

I should have known when I saw your name on this that it would be incredible and it is utterly utterly incredible I love it utterly utterly love it.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-05-31 11:53 PM


So very beautiful, Marge...I've never been to Oklahoma...but you just brought it to me.

~ midwestern hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-06-01 07:03 AM



You picturepoems are lovely Marge...yes the horizons in the midwest are Just Like That...

ethome
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6 posted 2002-06-01 07:22 AM


Love the picture combined with such great lines....you're a peach Marge....a southern peach!    Even if this is Oklahoma.....he he have a nice day!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-06-01 08:00 AM


Marge,
You know your writing is always a hit with me.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-06-01 09:04 AM


Marge, just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this.
The poem and the picture go so well together..
And I LOVE the presentation!
~Hugs~

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2002-06-01 09:13 AM


Wonderful presentation Marge ... and I love the trailing off of the "fall" at the end. You've captured the promise of impending rain beautifully.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2002-06-01 12:40 PM


Marge:  Another great partnership here. A beautiful poem and an awesome picture. (But I hope the rain stays in Oklahoma!!)

Betty Lou Hebert

GypsyRose
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11 posted 2002-06-01 04:51 PM


What a beautiful poem this is. I live in Oklahoma. I guess that makes me an Okie! LOL!

[This message has been edited by GypsyRose (06-01-2002 06:08 PM).]

vandana
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12 posted 2002-06-01 06:28 PM


liked it
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