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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-04-17 11:25 AM

Iambe told me
“she really likes you”
and I laughed.

I’d talked to her a bit
While Iambe had danced
But other than what I had seen
As the alcohol animation she had
Really hadn’t given it much thought

Seems they had run into one another
Down at the store and she had asked Iambe
“Is he good to you?” followed by
“I think he is so funny.”
And Iambe came home to tell me again
How dense I could be.

Iambe wasn’t jealous exactly
More laughing at me for not seeing what she did.

I let it drop and worked the conversation
Around to talking about Iambe
One of her favorite subjects if she wants to talk
While inside I smiled
remembering a glimpse of white lace
and the eyes that had looked at me
Wondering what was beneath

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (04-17-2002 11:47 AM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-04-17 11:32 AM

I think you should listen to Iambe.

I think she's right.

"she really likes you"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-04-17 11:43 AM

I let it drop and worked the conversation
Around to talking about Iambe
One of her favorite subjects if she wants to talk
While inside I smiled
And remembered a glimpse of white lace
As the eyes that had looked at me
Wondering what was beneath
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ahhhh yes....now we're getting warmer...
ummm I mean...youre getting warmer LOL
keep them coming as the muse allows...
moths are insatiable...you'll have to say when.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-04-17 11:45 AM

No when...more...

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

4 posted 2002-04-17 11:50 AM

loved your intuition.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-04-17 12:21 PM

Oh yes! More lambe please?!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-04-17 01:37 PM

yes?....and then?....hmmm? Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-04-17 01:43 PM

Ron

So intricate, the in and out of human connection, and subtle meaning. A fascinating poetic story you write!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-04-17 05:25 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful words always reflect passion in its finest! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

9 posted 2002-04-17 05:31 PM

Cat hair~ Yeesh, it's like watching tv!

I think I like this more though...your imagination has more freedom. lambe doesn't know how lucky she is! Although it would be interesting to see things from her viewpoint, maybe it'd be a different story.

Loving these!
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-09-26 02:16 PM

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