Open Poetry #20 |
Love? 20 or less |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
(from the notebook/reflection) Echo's of my soul --lost in you I see your heart, I feel the silence --deep inside I lay weeping ~~~~~ ~Sinking fast into a ocean of you, what if told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-23-2002 12:32 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, So much emotion packed in to so few words...wow! |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
I love compact, concise poems & this is definitely one of them! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
lovely, Green Eyed One How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
weep water wets lover kiss places |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren, you know how I love these! Beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
It is not the quantity of words spoken that speaks volumes, but much more is the quantity of the words spoken that do. This was very good and very deep. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words Lauren..nicely done hon ..hugs ~Victoria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Lauren, I can feel sadness in these words, I hope everything is alright and now love has filled you with a blissful silence always! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beauitufl heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A lot of sadness in these few words. Nicely done. Sandra |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Love, then yet, loss. I wonder if the two are the same sometimes. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
somy~ you are soooo beautiful, inside and out....HUGS Theres a man in his own prison, with a crime that nobody knows he has sentenced himself to die with no chance of pardon or parole.. he's lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-23-2002 02:57 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes, This tempest weighs heavy for its size. Excellent. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lauren, Your pen leaketh forth purest honey, sweet dew of the goddess in you. Love tears - inspired by Greeneyes poem "Love - 20 words or less" Pure warm sweet tears of loving dew swell fresh ambrosia waves arousing sensual appetites for hungry, thirsty eternal souls. Love tears. ((Lauren)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you are so good at these 20 or less! You even inspired silver streak Like the new pic dear!! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Power packed yet with your special even flow. Where have all those echoes gone?? Aching to be set free. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Good Evening all~ I am 'venting' right now...I assure you I am 'ok' with much faith....from my heart thank you... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - as always, but tears in your eyes should never be... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellently done Lauren....soft and so very loving....BTW....really like the new Pic! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lots of punch in less the 20..enjoyed! |
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