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Creation's sweet fire - A Villanelle
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Creation's sweet fire - A Villanelle |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Creation's sweet fire - A Villanelle I have this little feeling come to me I feel hot red fire, God, Mother desire As I go reeling writing poetry And see the need for Father, purity And putting them together in a fire I have this little feeling come to me And so I know that Mother God does see Soul prints of perfect creatures, up higher As I go reeling writing poetry What Mother God Creates needs purity And putting both together in hot fire I have this little feeling come to me And God the Father of all purity. Fulfills all God the Mother's warm desire As I go reeling writing poetry God the Mother of all desire in me Fused within each other in love's sweet fire I have this little feeling come to me As I go reeling writing poetry A feeling of Creation's sweet fire. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 16, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Newell, this is wonderful, villanelles are so difficult to write and you create them with real flame of excellence! (big hugggsssssss) His spiritual words always light your thoughts, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving comments. As you may know from reading my comments most of my poetry comes to me in Spirit in the Wind. I believe I have a gift from the Holy Spirit, talked about by Christ and Paul. In any event after I went to bed tonight the thought lines came to be with the sense that they should be arranged into a villanelle. And so I got up and typed them and miraculously they did fit the villanelle structure. Note that I only received a set of lines from the wind, not the entire poem. Just a passing comment of interest. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-16-2002 11:40 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Believe me, always take His word for it, you have a true talent of poetry inside you and never stop captivating that wind like you always do, for you have a heart of grace and deep down, I believe we are all sons and daughters to Him with a voice to share! (sigh) Again, thank you for this wonderful comment and for sharing this marveling perspective with us all! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Your welcome, Noah. God bless you. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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