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Open Poetry #20

Down to the Bone

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-04-16 06:54 PM

connections secured
a labyrinthian adventure
shining blue and grey
it was at Manassas they
fought their passion play
on a night cold and
chock full of fright
this sculptor/landscape changer
found out he was right
3 cuts of rough all alone
and a bottle of Down to the Bone....Mark Coburn

[This message has been edited by Mark Coburn (04-17-2002 06:21 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-04-16 07:00 PM

Three cuts of rough? Golf anyone?

Liked this...very alone, down to the bone
write...

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

2 posted 2002-04-17 06:22 PM

magnus ya got it right........indeed.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2002-05-16 01:55 PM

I liked this.

Dawn

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-16 02:25 PM

I really enjoyed this too, but ah caution against using "chock full of" in ANYTHING. Yr other words, tho, are pure imagination. Loved it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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