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Mark Coburn
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0 posted 2002-04-16 06:54 PM


connections secured
a labyrinthian adventure
shining blue and grey
it was at Manassas they
fought their passion play
on a night cold and
chock full of fright
this sculptor/landscape changer
found out he was right
3 cuts of rough all alone
and a bottle of Down to the Bone....Mark Coburn

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-04-16 07:00 PM


Three cuts of rough?  Golf anyone?

Liked this...very alone, down to the bone
write...

Mark Coburn
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2 posted 2002-04-17 06:22 PM


magnus ya got it right........indeed.
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3 posted 2002-05-16 01:55 PM


I liked this.

                   Dawn

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4 posted 2002-05-16 02:25 PM


I really enjoyed this too, but ah caution against using "chock full of" in ANYTHING. Yr other words, tho, are pure imagination. Loved it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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