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Poetic Spinning
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Poetic Spinning |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Poetic Spinning take me make me part of spinning...words twirling faster and faster swirl me into the midst of dance trance entrancing flowing trace of graceful arabesques of light come spin me round and round before lifting me again above the heat of this beat feel it now as it pours flowing through and over the skin touched by music of such delight lightly balancing on toes then foot before taking off again in rhythm of heat Come turn me around spin the top of my soul into rivers of gold and silver flow Raise your eyes and poet spin me around with your words ¥ Krissy Where it not for Margie girl this top not only wouldn't be coloured it would be wonky as well. Therefore I dedicate this to Margie girl who brings the colours to the rainbows and spins me in her magical words. And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why don't you just come in and show us how it is done? LOL...this is a marvelous structure of poetic form and visual delight...you are gaining on your Mum by the word, my dear, by the word... do NOT throw that at me, Mushy... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Way to go Krissy! You have done very well with this one... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSweetKrissyGirl~ You certainly spin a beautiful piece of poetry~ Ah ... tickles me to see you mention 'wonky' here~ Your Mum knows ALL about 'WONKY'  Any little tips I give are given with LOVE~ Keep spinning baby !  Your word-thoughts are precious~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Krissy~ Yay! Wonderful!  I love shape poems! I've never written any as artful and elaborate as this though. Superbly done poetess  *hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wheeee! Look at meeee! Spinning free, merrily Twirlling, whirlling Round and round, round and round As Krissy's top, I found, spins me around. ((Krissy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Krissy! This is sheer delight! I love it to pieces....and, YOU are ever so clever. ~Hugs~ |
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