Open Poetry #20 |
Twogether |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Twogether ~*Marge Tindal~ Just the way it's meant to be Twogether in love foreverly~ You and I in heart's adorn The greatest love we've ever worn Shared in countless memories made Twogether in sweetest serenade~ Each step twogether that we now ascend Brings us closer twogether than we've ever been~ This one is for you, Bill ~Have I told you lately that I love you~ ~Well, I most definitely do~ April 16, 2002 And thanks again to my friend, June, for the inspire word 'Twogether'~ Hope you like where it waltzed~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yeahhhhh Marge~ wonderful use of the two words...loving this... here's to forever....(for you and bill) Lauren~ Step through the |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Twogether foreverly... sometimes a love is so special it needs new words. *S* I love this tender declaration, Marge... and I know Bill will, too... Give June a big thumbs up from me! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Enjoyed together thanks for posting. |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Really like this one... My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ Awwwwww! My heart smiles a big grin from this one. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ I appreciate it~ Worked well for me in this write of the heart~ SuthernGal~ You got that right ! And my foreverly is perfect when we are twogether~ Tee-Hee-Hee ... Bill says that breaking it down into syllables it's TO-GET-HER ... and he did ! for June !! Seymour~ Awwww, thank you kind sir for the read and always sweet reply~ HaydenJames~ Thank you so much ... glad you enjoyed it~ SmittenKitten~ Awwww, you're such a sweetie~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Thanks for sharing your special feelings for Bill, with all of us. This is a charming poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly delightful and I love it. I’ve been itching to get to this all afternoon, but YOU know who has been sitting here preventing me. Tis a good job I adore her isn’t it I love it and so does Krissy. She says the only thing that would make it better is if she could put a swirl on it. She’s obviously hooked on swirls Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt who weaves rainbows and colours dreams. Thank you, if I could swirl this I would, but even without a swirl it’s a fabulous piece of writing. I wub it utterly too. Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, Bill has got to be one very lucky man....You write love of him so totally FOR HIM!....Twogether Foreverly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ My poetic pleasure dear lady~ Thank you always for the read and replies~ MarshaLove~ LOL @ our Krissy ... she's been slapped up side the head with MargieGirl's magic palette of colors~ Krissy~ You sweet artiste` you~ You are such a delight ... I can't wait until September to see you and your Mum~ OH .... hurry September~ Magnus~ I know we both realize how very fortunate we are to have reunited after so many years ... the commitment is foreverly~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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