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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-04-16 02:41 PM

Green is all I see;
Flowers bloom to confuse me-
I'm in a maze.

Music is all I hear-
Birds the queen of singers
hum out my dreams.

Dreams are dreams;
they will always be my dreams.
Beauty touch not me,
perhaps I don't love.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

1 posted 2002-04-16 02:55 PM

I've read this over and over. Very nice. Could you now explain what your inspiration was?

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2002-04-16 03:12 PM

sometimes flowers are like a maze, they are beautiful but confusing (Like if you want to count how many are there and their kinds) Flowers can be arranged to be a wall of a maze which is beautiful yet confusing.

Songs of birds are great comfort, peace to heart, isn't that what everybody dreams to have? And the melody is happy.

What I'm really saying is that my surrounding is happy and full of love, but I don't love, it touch me not (I think I'm selfish) I'm confusing how to change to be caring. One can give, but not sincere. I mean not really want to give, it's just that you know it's right to do. My parents say it is a value problem. If I change my value, it will be fine. Anyway, I hope I'm not a stone, and probablly I'm not. Sometimes I like to help others.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2002-05-16 01:39 PM

Nothing wrong with liking to help people. I liked your poem.

Dawn

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2002-05-16 01:44 PM

A deep and pondering gift
you have left us; the
explanation only goes to
deepen our anticipated
understanding...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-05-17 12:56 PM

You cannot be a stone and write thoughts like these

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-05-17 01:19 PM

I love yr view of bein' surrounded by love but feelin' isolated from it at the same time. The last stanza was especially powerful. I'm adding this to my library.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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