Open Poetry #20 |
Dear Mister Brown |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Many houses lined up on the street, In all colours - loud and discreet, Hiding places where people meet, With smiling faces as they greet. The red house is where Old Jack lives, One who likes red wine and olives, Red is full of life he believes, Like blood that flows under our sleeves. The bright one there is Aunt Mary’s, The one who looks like a fairy, Though her habits appear eerie, In her heart she’s such a dearie. The big one in cream is young Mark’s, The kid who jogs around the park, His eyes are full of youthful spark, So bright that they can light the dark. So good are people in this town, Ones that would never let you down, So stay with us Dear Mister Brown, And we won’t let your high hopes drown. ..... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (04-16-2002 06:44 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Sudhir...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Different style from you my friend Is this about UPS or a human? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, A very good write and I enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the stroll through the neighborhood. And yes, please keep smiling, and be happy. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It takes every kind to make one big pleasant neighborhood...thank you for this Suddy... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like the rhythm of this my friend. . . reminded me a of children's song. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all, my friends... Regards, Sudhir |
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