Open Poetry #20 |
I'm scared to sleep |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I’m scared to sleep Dreams are truth I watch the clock It refuses to stop 1:32 1:33 I’m scared to sleep Tomorrow I will face fears But for now I am awake 1:34 What good are you TV Dwelling thoughts don’t have commercials I’m scared to sleep I wish someone would call Its nice to catch up with happiness Times were good then I slept well I am scared to sleep 1:36 The sox won today I’m unusually indifferent Something needs to change I’m scared to sleep 1:37 When will this end I’m scared to sleep |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well don't just sit there and wish someone would call! Call someone! I do know what you mean though Kev, I've been there too, many times. Usually a nice cool glass of wine works to relax and turn off the mind for a while... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love this. I love the logging of internal thought. For anyone who has ever been there, it adds to the intensity. and hey, I'm scared to sleep too. That's why I'm still up. Great job with this! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Hi there cutie pie~ It's nice for us that you aren't sleeping, but penning intense poetry to share~ I reach out with a soft lullaby to soothe you into slumber~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Quite there. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope good things happen for you...do your part and trust for the rest...get some sleep because some parts of a situation are out of your control...James |
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