Open Poetry #20 |
But Not of Yesterday...duet with BC |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
But Not of Yesterday haunting memories ghosting me love thoughts, of you, returning each eve shadows of thoughts loving only you through the soft night sun sets to warm glow clouds become indigo sheets silking the night skies into the warmth of morning mist settles from the light my touch into you escaping my reach tears fall into hands, from eyes looking back on time always within reach I wipe every one of your tears today, now, but not of yesterday… Maureen and Bill Charles "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-07-2002 08:04 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet Bill and Maureen, you two make such a wonderful team, this is soooooo sensitive and romantic! (BIG GROUP HUG) Your words always make me smile, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bill and Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Two hearts make a whole~ You two wrote this so well. Very pretty~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - love writing with you. This needs to be moved to #20... BC |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A beautiful duet... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah beautiful duet, you two are amazing Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill & Maureen darling pair you two write so well together, this is exceptionally well written. I love it, I absolutely love it Absolutely excellent writing you know I love every golden word. You both are incredible writers. Fabulous writing utterly utterly fabulous Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thank you, everyone. Bill has a very romantic writing style that I enjoy pairing up with. Thank you Bill, you made my senyrus have meaning. *s Maureen |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lovely!!! Lauren~ Step through the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
HOORAY! Wonderful, both of you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
WOW awesome duet you two, loved it. floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter & BillCharles~ A lovely blending of poetic thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BC & M, Wish I had thought of putting you two together. Wonderful write. Do another one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you All again and Bill wherever you are, I am wishing you comfort and am looking forward to your return. hugsss M |
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