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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-07 08:02 AM




But Not of Yesterday


haunting memories
ghosting me love thoughts, of you,
returning each eve

shadows of thoughts
loving only you
through the soft night


sun sets to warm glow
clouds become indigo sheets
silking the night skies

into the warmth of morning
mist settles from the light
my touch into you


escaping my reach
tears fall into hands, from eyes
looking back on time

always within reach
I wipe every one of your tears
today, now, but not of yesterday…



Maureen and Bill Charles


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-07-2002 08:04 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-07 10:07 AM


enjoyed it a lot
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2 posted 2002-04-07 11:43 AM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet Bill and Maureen, you two make such a wonderful team, this is soooooo sensitive and romantic! (BIG GROUP HUG) Your words always make me smile, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bill and Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-07 12:32 PM


Two hearts make a whole~
You two wrote this so well.
Very pretty~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-04-07 05:43 PM


nakdthoughts - love writing with you. This needs to be moved to #20...

BC

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5 posted 2002-04-08 09:20 AM



A beautiful duet...

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6 posted 2002-04-08 09:37 AM


ah beautiful duet, you two are amazing

Charisma

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7 posted 2002-04-08 10:04 AM


Bill & Maureen darling pair you two write so well together, this is exceptionally well written. I love it, I absolutely love it

Absolutely excellent writing you know I love every golden word. You both are incredible writers. Fabulous writing utterly utterly fabulous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-04-08 10:22 AM


I thank you, everyone. Bill has a very romantic writing style that I enjoy pairing up with.

Thank you Bill, you made my senyrus have meaning.
*s
Maureen

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9 posted 2002-04-08 12:03 PM


Lovely!!!


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-04-08 12:27 PM


Maureen,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

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11 posted 2002-04-08 02:48 PM


HOORAY!
Wonderful, both of you!

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13 posted 2002-04-08 06:19 PM


WOW awesome duet you two, loved it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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14 posted 2002-04-09 02:06 AM


Wynter & BillCharles~
A lovely blending of poetic thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-04-09 02:42 AM


BC & M,
Wish I had thought of putting you two together. Wonderful write. Do another one.

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2002-04-16 03:39 AM


Thank you All again and Bill wherever you are, I am wishing you comfort and am looking forward to your return.

hugsss
M

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