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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-04-15 10:39 PM



images are soiling me
images destroying me
til I'm laid unaware

they bring me back to life
they give me the power
just enough to think you care

images are thirsty
images are killing me
they're the only thing
that really isn't there  

i thought I saw
reflective flaw
but backwards
was it only me
  
the ecnalubmA is rising still
looking for another kill    

images are thirsty see
images are killing me

so imagine what you will
the ambulance is rising still

© Copyright 2002 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-04-15 10:42 PM


Your poems are always interesting to read, Walt.

~sky

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2 posted 2002-04-16 03:56 PM


hmmmmmm. . .I'm wondering where these images have come from. . . they speak with different voices. . . yes. . .

excellent. . .

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elisaseyes
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3 posted 2002-04-22 10:18 PM


What is going on in that head of yours? You've told me some of your imaginaings before and you come by your nickname "wayout"walt rather honestly!
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2002-04-22 11:24 PM


nicely put!


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
a ocean of you,
what if told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

cruz
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5 posted 2002-05-05 06:50 PM


the ambulance thing is so cool as is your whole poem. sorry it took so long for me to dig this one up, but i haven't been on the ball lately. very cool write
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