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woes and whims
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woes and whims |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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ups and downs woes and whims goods and bads shes and hims went the ways in front of them south and north back and forth round the bend turned on end went the ways in front of them where's the paths briars and grass lead to trails snips and snails say it twice sugared spice ... Woes and Whims... In this here midway town where's the road that kids go down |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Liked the format of this....well done.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like the flow of this one walt. . . reminds of a cummings poem. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Short and sassy m'dear Walt...nice to read your write once again...hope all is well!!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooooooo Sven thank you "anyone lived in a pretty how town"? I was writing this with cummings in mind good see you too devina  thanks all |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Been down the same road a time or two~ I tell you I am always losing myself!! |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
every line is so professional. tight like a drumstick on a snare. quite fluid. the subject is awesome. so...what is it that you're looking for? welldun |
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