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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-04-15 10:08 PM

Once upon the clouds to dance and lost to tones ethereal
Once upon the stars within his eyes my heart to crown imperial
Airy sounds like fingertips to beckon of my ear come here
Unearthly footsteps far away in whispers that seduce all fear

Once upon the clouds to wisp away in silken slings and arrows
Once upon the stars to pray, and fly away as springs first sparrows
Light to drift about the moon in calls of doves so softly coo
Unhampered by the cares that weight as cares so often do

Once upon the clouds to dance of light and shine benevolent
Once upon the stars to see into the sun embraced and reverent
Delicate to touch and toe to float in joy's illuminated breath
Unending in the songs that play inside the happy heart gone deaf

Copyright Kkh 4/15/02

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-15 10:13 PM

I like this very much Kathleen...it slips off the tongue very well...thank you...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-15 10:21 PM

Lovely...really lovely.
And I really like the title.
~Hugs~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-04-16 01:56 AM

OMG! I couldn't even begin to think of creating something like this! This is awesome girl! Be proud.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-04-16 02:45 AM

Kathleen,
Huh? What'd you say, I can't hear you! Wow...way cool.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-04-16 03:22 AM

ThisDiamond~

'Once upon the stars within his eyes my heart to crown imperial'

The depth of this piece is intricately woven in poetic passages of delight~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-04-16 09:13 AM

Love this, everything feels good in it.
Sandra

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

7 posted 2002-04-16 09:30 AM

This Diamond Hi there, this is soft ethereal so sparkling like a star itself, beautiful writing really beautiful. You’ve written this especially well

You do know that I love this don’t you? it is an excellent example of your wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-04-16 09:56 AM

ThisDiamond

Just lovely!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2002-04-16 08:35 PM

You are all so very kind. It is quite easy to let the good feelings flow here. Much appreciation to all. I continue to learn much. ThisDiamond

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2002-04-17 09:49 AM

This flows beautifully. *S* I enjoyed it very much. *S*

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-04-17 10:52 AM

enjoy your read

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-04-17 07:16 PM

(smiles) Wow, ooohhhhhh...I love how this flows down the page just like silk, sweet friend, this is so very well woven! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

13 posted 2002-04-17 09:22 PM

O, this feels wonderful! May I fly along?

((ThisDiamond))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

14 posted 2002-04-17 11:45 PM

This is very beautiful. I enjoyed it very much.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2002-04-20 09:32 PM

ThisDiamond - I'm glad I was browsing, as I found this gem. Great write with a lot within...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2002-04-20 09:42 PM

This one is smooth...James

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