Open Poetry #20 |
Lana |
ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Our voices breathe our passioned pleas why can we not just be you and me? Forever I want to be wrapped in your arms and sweetly seduced by all your charms I cannot stand being away from you any longer but for your love, I will suffer I want to be with you night and day, time is the only thing that stands in our way I save your messages on my phone so I can hear your voice when I feel alone Tell me when these feelings will stop because i know you feel the same Sometimes I feel like i'm in a dream then i wake up and you cease to be Tears of sorrow I cry at night but I know I will hear your voice in the morning light I know I tell you this everyday but I will tell you till the day I die.....Lana, I love you.......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Our voices breathe our passioned pleas why can we not just be you and me?" Why not, indeed. I enjoyed the read. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Laura, I have 8 saved messages on my phone...just for the same reason! Nice write. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Real love from an honest voice. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I have saved messages also...to hear her sweet voice and personality....James |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Thank you all for your replies to my poem. I have definitely found the one that I want to spend the rest of my life with. Voice mail is great isn't??? lol Take Care, ~Laura~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I'm so happy I found this, I almost commented last night but I had to go to bed! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy for you and I wish you and Lana the greatest happiness forever together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Noah, Thank you so much for your reply. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~Laura~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Laura, yes, it is. . . this is very good from you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
john, hey! how are you???? thank you for your reply. ~Laura~ |
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